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Rephrase, beef up, and add whatever you want. I'm sure you can add a lot with your take on it, theres a few other things to tackle, like diction in the passage. I have a research paper to work on tomorrow night, and I didn't want to take the chance and have only half-done. But we still have some time, so add whatever. If not, I'll add a few things before class on Thursday.
